First-Year Writing Seminar Prize
Foreword for the FYWS Writing Prize by Dr. Martha Reid, English Dept
One recent summer, Political Science Professor Khristina Haddad, a student herself in the Moravian Archives German Script Course taught by Director and Archivist Paul M. Peucker, encountered a poem written in 1755 by Brother Rundt, a Moravian missionary in Pachgatgoch, about the schoolboys back in Bethlehem who copied texts for the missionaries and other congregations. The poem imagines the boys copying and writing with a profound love for words that was characteristic of the early Moravians in America.
Something of their joyful reverence for writing surely has come down through the centuries to our twenty-first century Moravian University. This is apparent, for example, in Professor Haddad’s wish to foster such feelings in her own students. It must have motivated the three students who wrote prize-winning essays during their first-year seminars last fall and the dozens of other students who have competed for the annual FYS Writing Prizes. The Writing Center tutors and faculty members who served as judges also shared in that joy and reverence. Recognizing this intellectual and emotional connection to our eighteenth-century predecessors helps to contextualize these contemporary essays, as well as Moravian’s institutional goal supporting good writing across the curriculum, within a tradition of personal and global communication.
The FYS Writing Prizes themselves follow in a somewhat briefer tradition established by the annual awarding of prizes for the Best Writing 100 Essays, beginning in 1998-1999. Published in print editions for more than a decade, the Best Writing 100 Essays now make way for digital dissemination of the newly prized essays. What would those boys quietly plying their pens and ink in 1755 have thought of this development? What would they have thought of the range of courses from which the eighteen submissions to this year’s competition were drawn? They probably would have felt relatively comfortable in courses such as Medievalism, Self-Discovery, What is Education For?, Random Acts of Compassion, Water in a Thirsty World, and Composing the University Essay. Courses such as Gandhi and Nonviolence, The Body and Science, and Ethical Issues in Healthcare might have challenged them with new information but within familiar conceptual contexts. Imagine their surprise, however, when confronted by History of Rock ’n’ Roll, The Biology of Love and Sex, and Lies, Damned Lies, and Statistics. On second thought, they probably would have fit right in with all of them, writing multiple drafts, offering valuable feedback to each other, and revising their way towards winning essays.
Our prize winners did just that. What is that noise we hear off in the distance but moving closer? Two hundred and fifty-eight years of joyful and reverent tradition. Two and a half centuries of good writing. A boatload of hard-earned and well-deserved applause.
The annual First Year Seminar Writing Prize is awarded to the best academic essays written in a First Year Seminar course.
We are pleased to announce the winners of the 2014 First Year Seminar Writing Prize:
2014–2015
- First Prize "Painting with Blood: Analyzing the Symbols in Guernica and its Influence on Society" by Arianne Aguirre (Written for Dr. Claudia Mesa’s course, The Spanish Civil War in Literature and Film)
- Second Prize "Sexualization of Women in the Music Industry" by Paige Hawk (Written for Dr. Joy Hirokawa’s course, Music: A Force for Change)
- Honorable Mention "Social Media: The Most Effective Panoptic Method" by River Jordan (Written for Dr. Nicole Tabor’s course, Critical Thinking, Argumentative Writing, and the Discourse Community)
Previous Winners
2013–2014
- First Prize: “Wampum and Its Role in the Formation of an Interdependence between Iroquois and Europeans in the 1600’s” by Branden Weghofer (Dr. James Paxton, Natives and Newcomers)
- Second Prize: “Murdering Subcultural Identity: the Commercialization of Alternative Rock” by Kyle Novis (Dr. James West, Money Physics and Metaphysics)
- Honorable Mention: “The Ethics of Enhancing Soldiers” by Jordan Sweeney (Dr. Virginia Adams O'Connell, Barbies, Bioshock, and Borderlands: The Future of Human Enhancement)
2012–2013
- First Prize: “The Power of Panopticism” by Faith Brown (Dr. Nicole Tabor, Composing the University Essay: Critical Thinking, Argumentative Writing, and the Discourse Community)
- Second Prize: “Stoking the Fire” by Richard Hopper (Dr. Kelly Denton-Borhaug, What is Education for?)
- Honorable Mention: “Genetic Engineering and Distributive Justice” by Bethany Rang (Dr. Sue Scholtz, Ethical Issues in Healthcare)
Call for Submissions
We invite first-year students currently enrolled in a First-Year Writing Seminar (FYWS) class to submit original manuscripts for the FYWS Prize. Submissions must be academically focused (no creative writing or personal essays, please) and written for a current FYWS course. Winners receive a cash prize, and winning essays are published on the Moravian University Writing Center Website. The first place essay is awarded $75 and the second place essay receives $25.
Submission Guidelines:
- Essays must be submitted by Sunday, December 15
- Essay should be typed and double-spaced with numbered pages and an original title. Your name should NOT appear anywhere on the essay itself.
- Include a cover sheet that contains the following information:
- your name
- your campus address, phone number, and email address
- the essay title
- your FYS instructor’s name
Essays may be submitted electronically (formatted according to the guidelines above) via email to Meg Mikovits. Please send Microsoft Word (.doc or .docx) files only.